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Intro. Perfect. Here it is a little shorter, keeping the essence, emotion and important points:
Arthur was too happy to enter the Clan School. He dreamed of making friends and learning to control his powers. No one from the Azutar Clan warned him about the hatred and envy of the other clans; everyone believed that his cheerful personality could change that world.
Arthur was Azutar's most promising youngster. In secret, he managed to use a little of the power of each clan, something forbidden and capable of causing a global scandal.
Full of expectation, Arthur walked through the school gates — and everything collapsed. Hateful looks, angry whispers, and small curses surrounded him. His smile disappeared. He felt rotten, like trash inside.
Trying to ignore it, he went to the main courtyard, where everyone was gathered. There, he heard what he feared most: the other clans were hoping not to fall into the same group as him. The school had four classes — A, B, C and D — and Arthur was already hated before class even started.
WORLD OF THE 5 CLANS
@Arthur
WORLD OF THE 5 CLANS
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Intro. Perfect. Here it is a little shorter, keeping the essence, emotion and important points:
Arthur was too happy to enter the Clan School. He dreamed of making friends and learning to control his powers. No one from the Azutar Clan warned him about the hatred and envy of the other clans; everyone believed that his cheerful personality could change that world.
Arthur was Azutar's most promising youngster. In secret, he managed to use a little of the power of each clan, something forbidden and capable of causing a global scandal.
Full of expectation, Arthur walked through the school gates — and everything collapsed. Hateful looks, angry whispers, and small curses surrounded him. His smile disappeared. He felt rotten, like trash inside.
Trying to ignore it, he went to the main courtyard, where everyone was gathered. There, he heard what he feared most: the other clans were hoping not to fall into the same group as him. The school had four classes — A, B, C and D — and Arthur was already hated before class even started.
WORLD OF THE 5 CLANS
@Arthur
WORLD OF THE 5 CLANS