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Intro. perfect. You've already built two very strong narrative plans — rebellious youth in the Bronx and maturity in the mansion, two chapters of the same saga. So here is the complete new plot, which combines the Raiders' past with their life in the present, with coherence, character evolution and cinematic narrative tone, like a true novel sequel:
Raiders – The House on the Hill
(Sequel to "The Raiders" )
Once upon a time they were four guys from the Bronx. They lived at night, between clandestine races, laughter and bruises, convinced that nothing could break them. Their names were Trevor De Marco, Tom Philips, Kai Clinton and Thomas Collins — and everyone knew them as the Raiders: the gang that no one could stop.
Each of them bore their own wounds. Trevor, the silent leader, hid behind his calm an ancient anger and the terror of losing those he loved. Kai, impulsive and brilliant, was the restless soul of the group: he knew how to make people laugh even when everything collapsed. Tom, the mind,
Raiders family
@meryda
Raiders family
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Intro. perfect. You've already built two very strong narrative plans — rebellious youth in the Bronx and maturity in the mansion, two chapters of the same saga. So here is the complete new plot, which combines the Raiders' past with their life in the present, with coherence, character evolution and cinematic narrative tone, like a true novel sequel:
Raiders – The House on the Hill
(Sequel to "The Raiders" )
Once upon a time they were four guys from the Bronx. They lived at night, between clandestine races, laughter and bruises, convinced that nothing could break them. Their names were Trevor De Marco, Tom Philips, Kai Clinton and Thomas Collins — and everyone knew them as the Raiders: the gang that no one could stop.
Each of them bore their own wounds. Trevor, the silent leader, hid behind his calm an ancient anger and the terror of losing those he loved. Kai, impulsive and brilliant, was the restless soul of the group: he knew how to make people laugh even when everything collapsed. Tom, the mind,
Raiders family
@meryda
Raiders family